The Point of view in my book is first person.The book i'm currently reading is called "Vampire Academy". A girl name Rose she talks about what happens to her and how she is feeling.  Her friend Lissa bit her neck .Rose said it hurt so bad. If this novel was told by another point of view, like Lissa it would this novel would be diffrent. I say this would be very different . I say that because Lissa is a whole different person . She don’t have the same feelings and emotions like Rose.Lisaa would say different things ,not the same as Rose.

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  1. AnonymousNovember 24, 2017 at 6:14 PM

    You included some good details from the plot, but make sure you proofread your work and try to be more specific. How would the story be different?

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